I think that this piece is VERY cute.. i really like your depth of yet simple words.. well done..

5/5

I think this is a very clever write. The last stanza is my favorite (: 24K Gold Restraint -- a lovely use of words and images and meanings. Fluid, emotive, and sincere. Nicely penned!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

This was something I've never read about,And I enjoyed it,great job~ 5/5

It was nice to read about something i havent read about a thousand times b4
loved the word usage, flow and meaning to the poem
wonderful job
thanx for your comment on my poem
(two way mirror)
=)

\\"(^o^)"// ...WOW!!

it was a brief read but totally heart-felt..
undoubtedly amazing!!

..need i say more? ^__^

Wow, i really love this one, i can really relate, i have a really sucky relashionship with my mom too... this is so well written, again so beautiful, and powerful

I'm glad that I read this one. it was very symbolic and really emotional. It was as if she was being held back by her mother even when her mother was dead. I felt some relation to this when it comes to certain aspects of my life. Thnx for the read
5/5
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

The flow was a little off the message was right maybe just do a syllabol count on each line and fix the uneven ones and youve got yourself another amazing poem!