Comments : Breaking Point (free verse)

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    And the no structure on your words helped, M`Dear. I love this, words can not explain how much I love this. Reading your poetry is like reading my own thoughts written by someone else, someone so talented and amazing. At first, the length was a little daunting, but as I read through it, it brought tears to my eyes. Not just because it made me think of the situation I am in right now, but because I see how many people have to go through this pain of heartbreak, it sucks...but it`s life I suppose.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    I love how there is no structure to this. It's like a clear window to your heart. Truth. Keep it up.