Goos poem and strong title x

I like it. The second part didn't have the same flow as the other two but it's really good =)

"its too late his left behind " << Okay, it is it's gah. :/ And, there should either be a comma after late or his should be he's. I'm not sure which one you meant to do though.

This poem, so far was my favorite. I have one more to read "Crimes" But, I like this one best so far. It's seriously amazing. (:
5.5

I can relate to this. It's very good.

Wow pare this one really touched my heart and remind me of my current situtation.. waah (now my face is wet with my tears .. as if hehe).. honestly, short but very sad poem and very stirking indeed.i also loved the wording and the imagination.. idol pare!! keep it up

I enjoyed reading this one. very different. short but sweet n to the point. 5/5.
love willow oxox

Hum, the last line of the first stanza didn't make much sense to me, so you'll have to explain that one. This was a good piece, unique and thought provoking. The second part switched rhythms, but still well written.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Great penned dude... keep it up... well i went on your country last month... may kamag anak kac ako dyan... keep it up..

I really like this poem. Not all of it makes sense to me though. Loved the style. But im really not that big of a fan of the short poems

Im not quite sure what this is about please PM me and tell me. Your style is brilliant you have a well thought rhythm and well presented.
5.5 (again)

"Hoping for some assistance
much striving to survive
Wanted to go back to reality
its too late, he's left behind"

Not sure why, but these lines touched me the most! 5/5

The imagery in this is so descriptive, i love it! You use language so well, this flows really well and i love the way you get so much across in so few words. Amazing.
DnB