Comments : You Make Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Thanks for commenting my latest :) it made me smile.

    i love the last line of this ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Insanity

    O my god I love your wrighting, it makes you look forward to something differnt, and then you jump out in the last line and turn the hole meaning around

  • 16 years ago

    by kira2

    Wow, I love this -
    The whole time I thought, it must be such a great love and then the end came and I laughed, yet completely understood

  • 16 years ago

    by dreamer88

    I love the ending it just made me smile, but totally can relate, i was reading it to begin and thought, this guy is in love, (yer with his beer) lol
    truly great piece of work...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tulip2dreams

    Great poem really unexpected ending ... great work..keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hahaha. that was a funny ending. Man...what a way to turn the feeling around. hahaha Well, that most be one very special beer you got there. I think some people call that addiction. LOL Just kidding. nice piece!
    Charisma*