Damn. This one is good. I remember when that day arrived for me, but I sadly messed it up. I hope things go well from here for you dude, the overwhelming feeling of finally meeting 'her' is the best feeling in the world. Keep up the good work!

Wow, I can hardly believe something so short and simple can be so meaningful. Enough said.

Brilliant work, i love the form you chose to go with, very unique---very effective, keep up the great work

andrew

I do not know why but i think this poem is so real from your heart, i think i have a good talent of knowing when you mean your poems and words and this is one of those poems that i am sure it is real, please dont say no,lol...
im glad your pains are getting washed away.

take care

Nice poem pal... its always gud 2 have a hope... n this poem gave me sum kind of hope....

I missed this so much reading your poems :( but not anymore well dast xosh this was short but sweet ^_^.

Ooo i love it, as always! bootiful, nothing less of course.

Gah! I wish I find someone as dedicated and as caring you, one day...
5/5
simply beautiful

Beautiful. Really lovely. keep Writing.<3Emily