Comments : A Blue Sky Future

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is so positive, you managed to create special and truly beautiful tone. Ending is very effective and I like the title too. It is really inspirational piece. I don't like repetition of the words - I see- I know- and -I hear- but all in all this poem is great. It also has excellent rhythm, simple but powerful.

  • 15 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I love it!

    I really love how it flowed well, and it sounded so peacefully sweet. The idea of a bright future is great! I love the title as well, it helps set the mood. =) great write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Your poem is really amazing and I can see how optimistic you are and that is a good thing.
    excellent.