Aaawww so much emotion.
this poems great !
and it flows really really well !
i liked it how it was told like a story kinda.
its good as
5/5

xo.louiii

This is such a beautiful and inspirational poem Tahniya! Great imagery... Keep it up!

Omg so sad. and so many people do that too. bastards. lol
u have great talent.

x.chipmunk.x

Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg
<BIG> i love dis 1

i dont think thats ganna work but meh idk u know what i mean
love u beautiful