A touching, and heartfelt write. The flow was a bit twitchy for me in places, but overall good. (: I wish you would write the proper spelling of "thru" (being through), because things like that bring me out of the moment in a piece, -- slang isn't necessary here. Anyhow. Well done!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I absolutely loved it.
I know exactly where your coming from.
Twisted and confused emotions...
But then you begin to realize you don't want to leave...
they are who you want to stay with.
They are the ones you love.
You did a great job!!

:]

Ooo. I love this one. It's probably my favorite out of all three, though I don't quite know. Lol. :)

It was so beautifully written & the emotions were so heartbreaking yet lovely at the same time.

"It's time to move on, I am sorry but we are really thru."
^^ My only complaint is to change that to "through". Sorry, but I tend to be a grammer freak at times. :D

Fabulous job, deary. (: 5.5
-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Ahh, It's beautifully sad. Atmosphere you created with this poem got all over my soul, aww, it is so so touching, and that kind of poems go streight from heart, I love this piece. Deep emotions are breathing from every line.
Flawless write for me.
5/5 Though I think this deserves more.

This is a really good poem... i really liked it, and i can totally understand. 5/5

This poem is confusing, i get what you mean thought that it came from your heart, and that's what matters most, and sometimes those words from our hearts just don't make sense. this poem i just couldn't follow it went back and forth too much... i think if you broke up each stanza, like each one represented the different feelings, not mixing them into one stanza, that was what confused me the most. nice poem though, i liked it, great job.