Amazing talent xx keep it up xx

This poem has so many impressive lines, it is really deep and filed with emotions. I enjoyed in it! You really wrote it excellently. First and fifth stanzas are truly incredible but my favorite one is still:

-A flood of flame, we turn to ash,
No phoenix of rebirth,
A scorch within the sands of time,
For all we were not worth.-
^Wow...
Metaphors are also great and atmosphere of this poem is superb. Simply amazing job, well done!