"Then the silent sleeping"------this is a very simple yet lovely line.

Awh, I really love this. The feelings are starting to get to me. =)

-Taylor

Thats quite beautiful... In a way...
You've got real talent! xD

Absolutely beautiful. I love this one.

Hey that is an amazing write....
wonderful word choice...
the flow...
the imagination...
simply awesome...

excellent poem...

Wow great imagery, love this kind of thoughts,,,, marvelous work