Very well written. Keep up the good work!!!!!!

Honestly i'm kindda confused with the real meaning of it.. or am i just looking in a deeper side of it? Ok correct me if i'm wrong based on my own comprehension.. you have less oppurtunity but you never give up to attain your dreams? (is that so? well if it was then you have great meaning of poem).. this confused me a bit but i like the concept of it kindda unique..

Ah! I think this is wonderfully and uniquely penned. It was simple, but elegant, and holds more depth than meets the eye. Good rhythm,
and excellent job!

Write On!
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Very well written, very unique in the way you write. good job!

Peace, Joe

Excellent, I hadn't read anything like it before... :) really well written
5/5