I think the idea was good, except i think that the flow could have been improved a little bit. Despite this, good job. 4/5

You need to go through and fix your miss spelled words and lookit over again...cuz i barly understood what you were tryin to say...

Nice one...pretty nice...the idea is beautiful...make sure u keep writin...!!!

I really like it.
Think it's a very unique idea.
Take care

Like it. if u have time plz comment some of my poems x

Clever ...