That was sad yet so beautifully done ,and left a tear in my eye.I moved away and I managed to stay there for 5 years but I missed my dad so much eventually I had to move back to be closer and theres no way I would ever move that far away from him again.

Absolutely beautiful. It took my breath away. Great job, keep it up!!!

Bert
The bond between a parent and a child is one that will always be.

Although I know I am right with what I have to do
My heart is still broken, torn in two
My love for her is stronger than bricks and mortar
She is my babe, my one and only daughter
Her tears did freely flow
As I told her I have to go.

These lines are so heartbreaking. No matter how old our children get they are still our babies.
Excellent job my friend.
((Hugs)) Cindy

B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! ( i put that in peoples and i don't know if they get it but oh well!) it was interesting because it was a sad and happy kind of sad. i don't know but i love it because of the fact that i don't know. great job!!! 5/5!

I cannot imagine what I could say that hasn`t been said. I read this a few times just to get something new each time. Fantastically penned my friend. Timothy r

Beautiful! No amount of distance can alter a bond this strong,I hope you find a way to stay close and be together as much as possible, a great tribute to her.

Absolutley amazing. I had goose bumps. So full of emotion.. I do hope you get to see your daughter again

Aww what a sad and touching story.. great job on this one xx

Wow...I think you are a great dad!
Beautiful poem too.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is sad, yet inspiring.
a father's love to her beloved daughter.
thats sweet. <33
5/5