2/5.. avg at best

=O I so dont agree with sf49.
Its a short and simple poem but it tells a story about a girl that is disturbed and still trying to find herself in this world. Great job 5/5 keep it up babe. xxxx MMFCL Love Roxy

You are a great writer keep it up.

Hmm...not bad for a poem..but i must say there seems to be some typing errors...anyhow...good one...=)