I liked this, but at the same time it didn`t do a lot for me. The repetition helped, but a little more description into this would really help as well. I did like it, though.

5.5
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"Soul free now
Body motionless
At last they see she's gone "
^^ I LOVE THAT STANZA.

I love this poem all together.
It's amazingly great.
I think the first sad one that's not a love poem that I've read from you.

Keep up the amazing work, dear.
5/5

Loved it!
and my favorite part was the repeating stanzas
great work

Filled with sadness and nicely written, with interesting topic. You expressed emotions greatly. the ending stanza is very good conclusion to the whole piece.
Keep up!