I really like it! thanx for commenting my poem. i'll take it to heart. Keep up your good work. I just started so I really look up yo you!
xxm0nicaxx

Very interesting form, very..out of the norm so to say, and you rocked it, very well written, theres a lot of emotion..i love how you changed every stanza up, made it flow nicely and kept it refreshing, keep up the good work

andrew

This was good, the flow was okay and you have potential.
Love Tara-Kay
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