Comments : Trapped

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "Trapped inside their selfish world,
    Lashing out in fear,
    Trying to have everything,
    Consuming all they near."

    that stanza is incredible...its sad that we live in a world where ignorance is bliss...and it wont be until people start realizing this that we all live in a better place...great work on this!

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    This peom rocks! It is so beautifully written! You definalty know how to write!!!!!