I'd never seen or heard of this form of poetry before, but I like it. I'm not really one for styles of poetry which have fixed syllable counts, but I really enjoyed this.

It was very sad, very emotional.

Well written.

I havent heard of this style of poetry either but its always good to know that there are poetry lovers willing to give new things a go and bring them to our attention. I liked the whole structure of the poem, how certain lines were repeated it ended up being really effective in creating a dark mood. The wording was great. An emotive write

Take Care.

A very difficult form to use, but you pulled it off flawlessly, the imagery throughout this piece is incredible

Feeling empty and cold
I shiver from fear
My heart a blackened hole
Filling up with tears."

that stanza is amazing, great worK!

Very nice style and very emotional write.
Again, good flow and rhymes. You seem to be very good at that.
Keep it up with the different styles. You do a good job on them.