Wow, so deep. Nicely penned poem, my only change would be to possibly put some of your ambitions / goals in there. it would personalise it. I still really liked this poem, conveys a great message.
5/5

"This useful boxes of hopes
determination for our dreams
Stroll every possibilities
and succeed with good deeds"

I have to say that has been one of my favorite stanza that I have read in a while
5/5
a truly inspirational poem

I think that this poem speaks for itself. I also think that the flow was excellent. Very deep and poetic. A truely inspirational poem

5/5

Flying has always been a dream of mine. This poem makes me think a lot of it. 5/5

I really loved this poem. Its very passionate and I can tell that it was taken time on and thought out very well. Keep up the good work, I gave it a 5/5. (Please remember to return the favor as you said on the discussion board, thanks a lot!)
Rachel

This my dear..is awesome. i don't even know what to say..the whole piece just speaks to me so much..this was a wonderfully written poem with a great meaning behind the written words..nicely done.

You have your own simple unique way of describing your words and thoughts and you again succeed.. you nicely, portray that every individual has a dream and goals to accomplish and wanted to achieved. Idol pare!!!

Wow I just loved the ending here. It was deep and meaningful. In every one of your poems, each word hold such meaning that without one word, the poems flow would be all wrong. Well done *5/5*

Desperate feathered wings
connected to our minds
Searching for narrow goals
Our ambition's in life

--- this one was my favorite stanza, the beginning one because i can feel your voice on this one even more than on the rest. The image of the wings is a nce touch and I feel like that's why the title is learn to fly. To learn to find our goals and reach for them while we fly towards them. I'll be honest, I was expecting to read a bit more. But I do have to say that this was a good piece and that the flow was really good.