Comments : Scattered Thoughts; Real Words.

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    You know what alot of people feel

    ajs girlfriend

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was amazing.
    && Your confusion with the whole situation really shows in this poem. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here.

    Back to the poem:
    You did an amazing job. The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, & the word usage was good. Spectacular job, deary. (: Overall: 5.5

    ---- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by JR13

    You think maybe i can show this to my girlfriend. this is what i felt at one time. i mean everything is good now but this is esactly what i was trying to tell her but i couldnt fi d the words. so can i? 5.5