This was beautiful. I think that the flow was a bit off but overall it was a great peice. The emotion expressed was pure love. Great job!
5/5

Amber....

This is truly a remarkable work! 5/5

I like how heartfelt this piece is, its very emotional and honest. Absolutely love the start
"Written with emotions,
Love should always be.
No matter what,
People always say."
Great work, 5/5

Its like you feel the same way i feel. this is crazy. once again 5/5 great poem

A very good write!
Keep up the good work.

God bless u

I like it but it seems to not really have one main topic

Loved it!!
So much it earnt you FIRST PLACE!
The flow was brilliant, it was emotional, sweet and enjoable to read.
Love always, Tara-Kay
x

Aww, so cute. It was really easy to read and also connect to the poem. Sweet emotions to it, and strong love I could feel.
Amazing write.
5/5

Been awhile since ive commented your work but tis a very good poem joe,
the imagery tis perrfect,
i give this one a flawless 5/5!!!
keep them coming!!!

I really loved the last stanza, it shows real devotion for your girlfriend. Great poem, Joe!

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

This was truly a sweet and loving poem. The simplicity in which you wrote with was flawless and enjoyable to read. Althought I do think the flow was a bit rocky in parts, you made up for it with you warm emotions.

"Radiant smiles
Illuminate the sky,
Revealing a beautiful star,
In which I've named for you."
^I loved the imagery you painted in my mind with these words.

Well done *5/5*

I've loved you from the very start,
and will continue no matter what

Now these are words every girl likes to hear, hehe!
Very beautiful poem by you, Joe!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

The star is bright,
It's such a beautiful sight
Against the moonlight,
Just as you're to me.

This stanza I could vivdly picture then all the rest :)

This poem brought a smile to my face, and the flow was tender and smooth :)

5/5

With or without emotion, I guess love will always be.
i like the part where you have written
- Hands will meet,
And hearts will mend.-
You are very talented.