Great poem. I really liked how ur describing what the poem is about but ur not giving it away. Keep up the good work

I totally agree with MARY 5/5

Wow i see that you are a very deep thinker, i admire that about people, specially about guys, it is a joy to find guys that are so deep and intouch with themselves as u are ^^, for my perception of boys arnt very high...dont ask lol...

hey yeah, bout my poem, no i dont find anything, its because i dont try nd that is really bad....my life is a tragity when it comes to love and friendship I just hope it will change once i start my life

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