Comments : Beaten

  • 16 years ago

    by Kali

    WOW umm way intense there. But sad....I've had some stuff like that happen. Well anyways that was really good. ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    This was such a sad and awesomely good poem. youre really good, keep it up.
    5/5

    kimberly