Comments : Tragedy/At Night

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this one is truly breathtaking... I like everything about it: Wording is great, atmosphere superbly created and the flow really excellent.
    My favorite lines are:
    -Following..
    Unnoticed in the dark.
    Slipping through the shadows
    and breaking us apart.
    Beguiling..
    It mystifies the mind.
    Cruel manifestations,
    its tools to make us blind.-

    Well done, you write great poetry!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, what a powerful piece of poetry. Exellent vocab and word usage all throughout the poem. You provided wonderful imagery, although sad and dark. The flow was flawless as well. Great write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Wow...this is soooo powerful...it took my breath away. the word choice and the flow was just wonderful! this is a Beautiful piece! keep up the great work! 5/5 of course!

    Jenna

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow! Amazing poem!!! Totally powerful! A stunning peice to read! Beatuful flow....keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    This is incredible, it's so so good.
    Words espressed, emotions, thoughts, it's all there described so well.
    It's just exactly how I see the meaning of Tragedy.
    I have to add this one to my favourites if you don't mind.

    5/5

    Thank you for commenting on my work, it's very much appreciated :)

    xo angelique

    take care