Comments : A Mind's Infidelity

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom

    Oh, this is brilliant - a brutally honest cry from your heart - and yet such a human story which I can certainly relate to - tricky thing, the heart, isn't it?

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    It is never easy to be with someone and actually WANT to be with them, but still yearn for another.
    It is very obvious in this that you still yearn for someone else, and I like that in your poem.
    It is nice to know that there are more people out there who have gone through this, and I have not been alone.
    Although, 'tis sad, because no one should have to feel that way.
    The flow was excellent, and the rhyming was superb.
    The story line goes exactly how it seemed it should in a case like this.
    5/5
    -Lace

  • 16 years ago

    by Megg

    I love it!!!!!!!!!
    it helps that i know what your talking about
    your so good at putting everything into words
    i love you