I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

Overall this is a good poem. The thing is that sometimes repitition doesnt work. Your poem has a good but limited content. You can add more variety and flavors to make it better. 4/5 at the moment

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Fsams

Ur a great writer!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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I loved the usage of similes! great job again! it was flawless!