Omfg! can i steal this poem for my aim profile?!?!?! i love it l.o.v.e. really no other words...i was expecting something great but this just blew me away....go you!

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Great poem i really liked it..
keep it up i cant wait 2 read more

"the heart is sorry, all he knows is pain"

i dont know if it was intentional, but it seems as if your giving your heart a gender which has this crazy effectiveness to it...either wayi ts amazing haha, keep up the good work!

Oh my god!!! 5/5 such amaieing writieng!@ this is really good by far my favorite of yours!!! this is my favorite stanza

"the heart is sorry, all he knows is pain
he cuts to let the sorrow out, he cuts just to stay sane
the heart cries, the body drips
the blood runs down my fingertips
sobbing and weeping, day and night
cutting away to feel alright"

oh wow that is BY FAR my favorite.. nicely done don't stop writeing.. please check out my new poems... 5/5!
-Marina

OMG! I love this poem! It rocks! YOu are a spectacular writer! Definalty on my faves list!!!!

This poem is deep really deep .
og i know the feeling i been there.
but good work !

chicken joeys BILLY ~

Damn. O____O'' that was awesome!!

RICKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMFG! dude! u made me cry! u no how long its been since i read 1 of ur poems... 2 long if they are so good they make me cry! u no u have me 2 talk 2... which we havent dun 4 a wile but u no im here 4 u!

OMG i luved that poem!! it was tops!!
!~Taz~!

Awesome poem! I feel ya.

Wow I gave this a 5/5 I loved it. Great Job :)

Oh wow.. i can really relate to this one ... in so many ways.. the part cutting away to feel alrgith can relate to that line .. ALOT. but its an amazing poem <3

I was going to choose my favorite part of the poem, but i cant, cause i love it all. It just makes so much sense. I've never been through something like that, but the way you express yourself, it makes me imagine that person, doing what you say they're doing. ANd its just so sad, that people actually go through that. Great writing...one of my faves...

This has so much emotion, it was kinda hard for me to read..its not very poemy, but i think its good...
Aly

Its great poem you have here,sad and full of pain,i like the way that you talk about the heart like he is someone and the flow was great ,keep in good work,wel done 5/5

Good work, extremely moving, although poems are written sometimes in a state of fantasy and reflect nothing but our thoughts, they also allow for a thereuputical outlet for our emotions. I'd love to see you write poetry from a more loving perspective, go outside to nature, with pen and paper and write :)

One night gone another one past,
I wonder how long this torture is gunna last,
^^^
I would omit the I in the second line ... you will see how much better it will flow.
gunna ----> going to

The stranger cuts me, he hurts me inside
Seeing me bleed, because of he who cannot thrive
^^^
Very deep words.

The heart is sorry, all he knows is pain
He cuts to let the sorrow out, he cuts just to stay sane
^^^
Here "he" is repeated 3 times .... perhaps you would like

The heart is sorry, all he knows is pain
Cuts to relieve sorrow, carves to stay sane

He is dead and forgotten, but he still moves on
Hes living life even though hes gone
^^^
4 he and he's here .... perhaps

Dead and forgotten, but still moves on
Living life even though he's gone

This world dosn't need a depressed broken heart
That destroys its beholder, cutting it apart
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dosn't ----> doesn't
I really like these 2 lines ... quite the imagery painted.

I really like this piece, it shouts sadness and leaves the reader holding their heart.

May the ink of your pen forever flow ....
Luanne

Ok to tell the truth, if it wernt for the little explanation at the end of the poem I wouldnt have understood it 3/5

This poem is tottaly awesome!!!!! i love how the body is talking to the heart!!! i love the emotion!!!!!!!!!!

Your so hot and that was a awsome poem you rock e-mail back to me. by the way your hoooooooooooot