Comments : Poem One

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Amazing poem...i like it

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I like the first few lines how you talk about heartache and loneliness and how they've only hit you twice before. Kind of like you know thats a lot but more is surely coming. I thought it was a bit short but the flow and rhymes saved you haha 5/5 nice job