Comments : The Omen

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Very dark meaningful poem, well written 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I didn't think the first 3 stanza's were quite as good as the last. I think you described people pretty good. We're like an ocean on the surface our emotions all look the same but underneath you could never really know..... It's easy to hide behind a smile. Nicely done 5/5