Woo-hoo.. kaz .. my dear friend.. what shall i say about this one.. AMAZING ..

"..if you find me lying on the floor,
just know that I was dead before,.."

brilliantly worded .. and AWESOME right.. no doubt..
i walk a step further, holding my breath..
Amazing,
Keep it coming

~Wake~

Great poem.
the first stanza.
is exactly how i feel. "/

5/5.

Love it!

Great one.. It's kinda interesting... Love it. 5/5

Woooooow absolutly amazing! u got me teared up ere haha. well done kaz :> x

I totally know how you feel! i like this one too! lol

It sounded so sad...

This is a good sorrow filled, heartfelt poem. Uses good imagery throughout. Has a certain edgyness to it that calls out for attention.
Im unsure of a few of your spellings/grammar/punctuation, but it doesnt detract from the overall worthyness of this piece.

A solid write of sorrow and foreboding.

Nice Work.
[5/5]
~Pete.

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.............do i need 2 say sumthin bout dis....jus awe MAN!! really lyk the endnig para.......IT really makes me crawl.....

I LOVE IT .. I LOVE IT ... I LOVE IT =)
but why is it so sad.. altho' u rock in romantic ones kazy!!!!