I think this is really beautifully penned. You did extremely well with a very hard structure. I'm not the best person to comment on the structure of it - but i can truly tell you its a really nice read.
2nd line, last word - i don't know that word i can only presume you mean Deceived?
Great flow, wonderful emotion.
A defo 5/5 for me.

Wow!
well..first of..i think its a very sweet acrostic poem...considering u had ur friend's names i think..
i wrote an acrostic...but not like that....i really like it..=]

one thing though...2nd line first stanza...u have a spelling mistake...(deceived)...
i think thats wat u meant..
oh and try to refrain from using commas and dots at the end of each line....kinda breaks the flow..
but all in all..its amazing...a definite 5/5 from me..=D

O_o.
I love this. :)
A very creative write, that I'm sure was very hard to master.. I know I couldn't have done it. ;P

"[D]etecting each little black love-laced lie,
[A]ll things but the genuine or sincere,"

^^
Those lines were beautifully written. I'm envious. :) Magnificent job. Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Very well written. I have never wrote and acrostic poem but you have done a few of them really well.

[E]clipse of the heart leads us to deny,
[L]ittle deceives lust to which we comply.

I LOVE these two lines. Its amazing how often lust blinds the heart. You have done very good with an extreamly hard form. 5/5 Good job.