Comments : WALTZ OF THE STRAW MAN

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... enchanting piece, every line is amazing. I absolutely adore your poems, and this one is not an exception. Greatly written piece, with so vivid and effective imagery.

    -fade the lines and edges, go
    sailing into wet colours of the wind
    and the freedom of lucid skies. -
    ^
    these lines leave me completely speechless...