Comments : Master of Dreams

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Wow, I must say that I loved the vocab and descriptive language in this poem. It flowed really well and was just absolutely brilliant. I liked the title too, it drew me into read the poem.

    A great write:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Ah those memories, some we hold dear, some bring nightmares, but they are who we are. Nice arrangement and I liked your use of assonance and consonance. Nicely written.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    From start to finish, I was in a completely different world; a deliciously dark world, of course.
    The final stanza simply left me amazed. Lovely, lovely sad poem; it truly belongs here.
    Keep up the bloody fantastic work...or I'll have less good poetry to read.