Wow .. AMAZING .. Brilliant .. Damn Sad .. Superb Piece.. absolutely in love with this one.. great work and the last four lines .. just push it even higher ..

"..I'm sorry that I died tonight
I'm sorry it's my fault
I'm sorry for the fact that
I'm so sorry for it all... "

an Awe-some write . this ..

~Wake~

Hey!! i love this poem, it really makes me think.
your rhyming and meter are pretty much perfect!
well done, its really amazing poem!
loveemel. xx