Seems a lot like dark and sad in this. Excellent job! 5/5

A trully wonderful and sad poem. The rhythmn was outstanding and the imagery quite unique. I could picture an old farm house with a rotten windmill in the distance.

"An old yellow ribbon, still caught in the winds
is floating with the leaves of the yard.
But it cannot go beyond the boundary of fence,
for it's tied to my old battle scars."

My favorite lines [stanza]. Excellent choice of words.

Always,
Jeannie

Dang this is sad. Made me feel like i was there. ALmost mad me cry lol. Great job
5/5
-vino