Comments : Heartache and Pain

  • 14 years ago

    by Kyle

    I cried reading that kelsey.....thanks for writing was beautiful and true. means adding it to my favorites.

  • 14 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! Flow was near perfect as was rhyme. Normally this would sound cheesy but this piece made each line seem heartfelt and powerful and strong. Beautiful! I'm sure your friend appreciates it.