Comments : Heartache and Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Kyle

    I cried reading that kelsey.....thanks for writing that....it was beautiful and true. means alot...im adding it to my favorites.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! Flow was near perfect as was rhyme. Normally this would sound cheesy but this piece made each line seem heartfelt and powerful and strong. Beautiful! I'm sure your friend appreciates it.
    Charisma*

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Sandra Mansur

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your poetry. Your words create such strong emotions, but I felt they could become even more powerful with visuals.

    I’m a freelance artist with 3 years of experience, and I can turn the feelings and imagery in your poems into illustrations so readers can actually see the words come to life. We could even start with one poem or a few stanzas as a small project.

    I’d also love to share a few ideas on how visuals could help you reach a wider audience and create another way to benefit from your poetry.

    If you’re interested, feel free to reach me here:

    llunarlibrary@gmail.com
    Instagram: @lunaartsoul

    Warm Regards,
    LunarLibrary