Comments : Deeper And Deeper

  • 14 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow....this poem is so sad.....i cried reading it...cuzi know how that feels. the girl in your poem....how we relate...good job! this poem was great, it was very emotional and sad. good job..5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ken

    Very deep but i like it keep up the good work n message me again if u got sum new stuff or juss wanna talk

  • 14 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-that was really good.
    very sad, it has very good emotion.
    aish
    xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by xxLivxx

    Wow once again 5/5.

    it was very well written and very easy to relate to.
    I'm here if you need someone to talk to. I'm a good listener. and if advice is what you want I can do that too.

    <3,
    Olivia.

  • 14 years ago

    by Eclipse

    This was really deep..
    It really touched me..
    I don't know how you keep coming up with these well written poems..
    Anyway, I really think it was good...a bit sad, but good.

    You keep writing, and I'll keep reading! =)

    -Eclipse

  • 14 years ago

    by Syndicate

    That was beautiful! It was overflowing with emotion and had a certain....glow to it. It really stands out and I love it. You took care in choosing the words to express the feel of the poem and did a great job at it! I love it! =D

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow thats so deep... and it's in the tittle too
    good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Sorta like me sometimes... don't worry eventually things will be better

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    A good dark write, I hate to end them in the same manner though, but I guess that's because I have seen the light on self harm and much of what ailed me in life. It is good to get out the angst and the pain behind what drives us to that place, but it is even better to turn it around. I am rambling though lol All in all I thought it was a good write, I understand the emotion behind it and think you conveyed it well. Nice work.

  • 13 years ago

    by cory

    An amazing write.*Feels tug on heart* 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Stevie

    This actually brought tears to my eyes.
    For a person who was in that position, it makes me remember, vividly actually.
    It captures me and makes my memories come back.