Bonnie dear

Why is it that the
Rose has to wilt
Before it
Learns to
Grow?
^^^
This ending makes one sit back and really think. Such a deep message within the words.

Enveloped in a intricate cocoon
^^^
I love this first line!
As I love the Etheree form as well
Well done dear heart ... well done
Hugs
Luanne

Beautiful poem, it is filed with so many emotions and you expressed feelings amazingly. It is so sad and unique. Well done, you should be proud on this piece. You also created superb and very effective atmosphere with just few words. That is impressing, excellent job. It deserves more than 5/5

Wow...
This poem is truly deep and original, you picked great topic to write about and portrayed meaningful message in this powerful piece.
You expressed the sadness excellently, yet your words contain a lot of beauty.
I'm truly amazed with this brilliant poem.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Beautiful poem.

Yay geee! u didn't tell mi u had a new poem!
anywayz
wat a beautiful poem
ur a wonderful poet
it was so lovely
ily! ♥ Salvador

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

Your work is amazing, i9 love it

Loved this poem!