"And the sun giving up its taste of things;"
I absolutely love this one! As do I with all of your writing. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Great work on this poem
keep it up!
-Lisa

"But I'm sure, as I recall,
I don't remember you at all."

those two lines right there, MADE the poem, awesome work

"But I'm sure, as I recall,
I don't remember you at all."

That ended up being my favorite. Don't know why.. Just had a ring to it. Or maybe it was just rude.. and I like rude.

Good job, Laura and Luce.

"But I'm sure, as I recall,
I don't remember you at all."

those two lines right there, MADE the poem, awesome work

i agree, really i loved it.
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