Comments : Heartbeat

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Beautiful poem, takes me back home in sight and sound.

    Low throaty bellows emit an eerie sound

    That was super line, they sound like Bullfrogs on steroids, Ha! Ha! and good eatin too!
    Wonderful words DD, I have to plan a Vacation. Peace and Blessings

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Kay what an amazing read .... so very educational as well. As with Hellon's Haiku, I have added some new words to my vocabulary today .

    Wonderfully done and the imagery is superbly done!
    Hugs
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I'm lost for words... lol

    "Listen to the cries that each of them sing
    Okefenokee, "Land of the trembling earth"
    Existence of necessity in each living thing
    Natures beauty in death just as in birth"

    This whole poem just sounded so magical.. and beautiful..

    Very well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So beautiful and embellished with rich undertones of nature and darkness....I love the images that are elicited when reading this feast of words and rhymes....

    "Listen to the cries that each of them sing
    Okefenokee, "Land of the trembling earth"
    Existence of necessity in each living thing
    Natures beauty in death just as in birth"

    ^ stunning! I'm in awe of this dark glimpse into the land of the "Okefenokee". Outstanding write! Take care, Debbie