Aww this is really sad but a great joba t writing it i like the last stanzer very much .. hope it all works out

Beautiful poem.
well written. nice flow. :]]
5/5.

Another beautifully penned piece, i really enjoy reading your poems. They are so effortless to read. So much pain and anguish in so few lines.

Beautiful sadness finds me in peace
Crying the tears, I know will not cease.

Wonderful way to start the poem.
Job well done.