Comments : Lie In Bed

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow dear, this was another wonderful poem...
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think it's great how you take something so simple, the idea and even sometimes the words and make it into something so amazing. I can tell you love writing these type of love poems, as do I. Excellent work 5/5 GG23