Comments : Why I keep going?

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Who is this about? I like it, it's really good, it gets your feelings across well. I can relate :) Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by msluckyone

    That's lovely

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Beautiful poem. Very well written and I love the imagery it gives. My favorite were the last 3 stanzas:

    The way we are always together
    And never apart
    Maybe through distance
    But never through our hearts

    The way he looks into my eyes
    And knows that we are true
    The way he looks at me
    When he says "I love you!"

    Our hearts as one
    Our love just glowing
    Are some of the reasons
    Why I keep going!

    Keep it up, I gave it a 5/5. Also I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/VOTE them. thanks alot!
    Rachel