Comments : What You Were Trying To Say

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow, another amazing one for you. i love that your poems come straight from the heart. i can't wait to read the next installation, you're starting to pass me up on number of poems lol, i gotta pick up the pace!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought it was very sweet, but it should be "mixed signals", other than that great job, an enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Listen to your heart and it will let you know exactly what she wants you to know ^_^. dast xosh.

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This was simple yet a good poem. actually i loved the last stanza, it made me more interesting and sweet.. keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dana

    I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Dana

    I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Awww Great work, Nice topic you touch in this poem. Taking moments right out of life itself, many could connect to it. Also, It was simple to read and I like that!
    Very Enjoyable write!
    5/5