Ahh what a beautiful and sweet poem. So pretty like ahh! I love just everything about this poem. Even though i don't read long ones i loved this! just amazing!
5/5 Keep up!

That , my friend , was nothing less than excellent.. had SO much to say... simply hooks the reader.. so weel expressed .. the repitin of the line , did you know you had me , certainly does add to the beauty of this piece..
a really sad yet Amazing write ..
Great work

~Wake~

Your so talented

Wow...Great Job =]]

Loved this..its amazing.
i understand your feelings.

Awwz that was rele cute...but it got sad at the end but i mean it was rele good...i liiked the flow of the poem!