This is genius! long but well worth the time! great job! 5/5

Thanks

I'm not going to lie. When I opened this poem my first thought was "Oh crap I'm not reading this whole thing." However, I did end up reading the whole thing. You had me hooked after only a few lines. I thought it was amazing that you were able to drift off topic a little bit at the beginning there, and then continue with the story without losing the interest of the reader.

Although it was definitely an interesting read, I was expecting some sort of moral lesson towards the end and it just wasn't there.

I still adored it though, and I'll definitely give you a 10/10 for keeping it interesting.

This is an interesting poem. Long poems would be easier to read if they were broken up into small stanzas. But you have a clever way with turning words into art!

Woahh, amazing. Congrats, I think this was a really well done poem. It was well thought out, and I really enjoyed reading it. Why me? A question often thought..
But anyways, you're definetly a great poet, keep up the great work. :)

This is amazing, and i can relate to this on, of course it would be about a boy not a girl. It went straight to my favorites!!

Um.... wha????

Errr.......... 1 out of 1,000,000,000,000

If you don't understand it don't vote genius ^^