Comments : My horrible devil

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can relate to this poem i know what you mean trust me 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Heartfelt words of the soul. well written, try reading your poem out loud after not looking at for a couple of days, to spot place where the flow is a little rocky. step up the vocab, to add power to your emtion, other than that good work 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    I really like this poem...i can relate...