Aww how sad&cute
good job i really liked it i think u should leave it as a song or maybe keep up the song but also make it into a poem. keep up the good work

plz coment some of my poems if u have time

I think its beautifull, you shoulnt change it at all. Its great

I think it would make a great song. I'd most definatly listen to it. :)

This would make a great song.. Just as it makes a great poem ! Start working on it, don't keep us waiting 5/5