Good one!Its my favorite of all!
Just keep it up and don't stop.I'm happy you like mines

I like this one its really good =]

Wow i always have like your poem
this poem touch my heart i like it alot it express of what you saw and what you felt
well keep it up

It's super. it reached my heart and took me on a flash back 2 my best days and made me ... it's nice

Very good poem nula keep it up, your english is pretty good for a second lanquage keep writing! ^.^

A really touching piece; your images and general tone make it applicable to anyone.
For some reason I really like the line " maybe a tear will form in your eye."