OMG how sad. This poem is soooo intense. Well anyways i really liked it even though it was really sad. I liked how u made it rhyme and i liked the rhythm. Keep up the good work. and if this is a true story im really srry that u had to go through that.

~mary~

Really good poem love.
Have that happened?
Anyway, it was good.

Love you nomatter what.
(wish I could be your sister)